Books of Poetry (alphabetical). Time Line. Books.
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Attributes of his tanka:
5 plus 7 |
5 plus 7 |
7 |
These tanka were immediately popular.
His content is a relief from the sweetness of too many tanka.
Poems To Eat (1998 translation by Carl Sesar). |
Three parts:
In his introduction, Sesar writes that Takuboku's style is to have each tanka be:
a strict report of events taking place in one's emotional life ... a straightforward diary. This means it's going to be fragmentary, it can't have a unity or a coherence. |
Literary critic Donald Keene writes (on the rear cover):
The original texts are among the most popular poems ever composed in Japan, and yet Sesar renders them so perfectly in language and feeling that one might think this was a collection of his own poetry. This book is the best possible introduction to Takuboku — and to his translator. |
Sesar translates with extremely short lines so a syllabic Westerner might "consider" them senryu. But they seem so rich that I am content to call them tanka as that is what Takubuku called them.
Examples:
just staring / at that / cloudy sky / I feel like / killing someone |
got five blocks / that's all -- / tried walking / like someone / with something to do |
See Takuboku at wikipedia for more info.
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